What has the computer done for our generation? How did it differently influence Babbage’s generation from Job’s generation? The computer is arguably the best piece of technology that the world has seen and only became what it is through the strong faith of Charles Babbage and Steve Jobs. Babbage and Jobs are more similar then anyone think and through their hard work they changed the world.
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Its pretty good, but your introduction doesn't have clear direction. You should add a little bit about similarities between Babbage and Jobs. Im pretty sure at least. Eh who knows. It sounds good though!
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Very good paragraph. I would have this paragraph a little more detailed. I understand that Jobs and Babbage were changing the world with technology which is a good chunk of what we need to know.
I really like your introduction. I think that your paragraph is off to a great start. It would not hurt if you added just a little more information about your actual paper. I can tell your paper is about Steve Jobs and Babbage and the comparison of two, but what else.
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